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欣宇秋月 发表于 2014-10-19 04:26

七律*贺邀月听风生辰

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欣宇秋月 发表于 2014-10-19 06:36

浮生得闻老师盛名，欣宇既欣喜又惶恐。

欣喜于胸无点墨的我又有机会得一良师；
惶恐于拙文劣字能否有更进一步的可能；

忙里偷闲的时光，欣闻老师生辰，劣作一首，聊表祝福之意！

祝您年年有今日，岁岁乐今朝；
愿您生活甜如蜜，好运连华年！

真心希望能如此歌所唱，你在文字的路口，能伴欣宇一程风雨，定当铭感五内！

再次把衷心的祝福送上，隔屏的老师---生日快乐！

风过无痕 发表于 2014-10-19 07:05

用词清雅明快，
写的真挚感人
通俗易懂，最难得，句句对仗工整严谨

贺帖中，不失为精华之作！加精共赏！

悠悠的水 发表于 2014-10-19 09:05

老友生日快乐！

悠悠的水 发表于 2014-10-19 09:06

传说中的鬼哥 发表于 2014-10-19 05:12


你出现啦？哦耶，翻班了没？

悠悠的水 发表于 2014-10-19 09:10

老弟有心了，老弟好文采

春暖花开 发表于 2014-10-19 09:17

有蛋糕的木有{:1_305:}

春暖花开 发表于 2014-10-19 09:18

听风生日快乐！

邀月听风 发表于 2014-10-19 09:32

欣宇秋月 发表于 2014-10-19 06:36
浮生得闻老师盛名，欣宇既欣喜又惶恐。

欣喜于胸无点墨的我又有机会得一良师；


感动兄台温馨贺词，句句情真，余，感激不尽，衷心谢过

另，兄台用词洒脱，对句工整，堪称古韵行家，余不胜叹服

相逢于兰草，不胜欣喜，望兄台切莫太过谦逊，更勿以师称

只愿开心共享，同舟共进

祝友秋安

邀月听风 发表于 2014-10-19 09:33

风过无痕 发表于 2014-10-19 07:05
用词清雅明快，
写的真挚感人
通俗易懂，最难得，句句对仗工整严谨


无痕慧眼，识得真品，赞一个

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